English 242, Spring 2005
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Imagining The Ancient Mariner through the Cinematic Medium

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In my essay on The Rime of the Ancient Mariner, I wrote about the relationship between the reader, the narrator, the wedding guest, and the poet, Samuel Taylor Coleridge. I discussed how the Wedding Guest functions as a figurative stand-in for Coleridge?s audience, working as a one man >>"Greek chorus" commenting on the Mariner?s presence and story. The Wedding Guest reflects the reaction of a reader of ?The Rime of the Ancient Mariner; his confusion mirrors our own, and he often jumps in to comment on the narrative, breaking up its flow. For my creative project, I considered the disjunction between the Mariner and the Wedding Guest, and attempted to come up with a visual representation of it. To do so, I thought about how the "Ancient Mariner's" narrative could be adapted for another medium. I ended up writing a screenplay for the first part of the poem and drafted a storyboard, illustrating how the film's shots would be broken down. Adapting The Rime of the Ancient Mariner for the screen proved to be a tricky endeavor, precisely because the transmission is so confused and the narrative so complicated. The story rapidly switches from the Mariner's point of view to the Wedding Guest's point of view to the omnipresent narrator's point of view, and vice versa. I thought carefully about the action/reaction shots of the Wedding Guest to the Mariner, and how the story drifts back and forth from the narrative proper to the Wedding Guest?s interactions with the Mariner. The project was an interesting one for me--I thought carefully about how and why the transmission of "The Rime" is complicated, and what I would do, in retelling the story, to make the connections more clear to an audience. It proved to be a difficult task, because I had to negotiate Coleridge's vision with my prerogative to connect with a modern day audience in a different medium.

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Icon-Comment mphillip, 3 years and 97 days ago. Icon-Permalink

The storyboard of this little film is pretty sketchy, & is difficult to view without turning one?s monitor sideways. And they key to the project seems likewise user-unfriendly ? no link to the essay you?re illustrating, some repetition, some hesitance to define what your project, by translating AM into a new medium, really highlights about the poem.

Nevertheless the screenplay itself is an engaging, thought-provoking exercise. By forcing yourself to treat the opening of STC?s poem as a visual continuity, obeying the conventions of film treatment, you bring into vivid focus the poem?s dependence on fits-and-starts ? the allegorical disjunctions in RAM that aren?t quite bridged by psychological realism. This becomes most evident when you are forced to contrastingly stock your screenplay with details that fill out, connect, court plausibility. Suddenly the Wedding Guest?s friends matter (you have them ?walk on without him, puzzled??); crewmembers have families independent of the Mariner (?We see the various people on the dock, wives, children, etc. crying, cheering, laughing, etc. as the ship departs?).

It is interesting to see you dispense with a VO at the beginning (?It is an Ancient Mariner?), but resort to one shortly (?He holds him with his glittering eye??) ? I wonder why one descriptive passage needs narration, the other doesn?t. Most interesting, I think, is the context for action that repeatedly forces you to interpret RAM: the Mariner is aware of the WG?s desires, annoyed by them, and makes the decision to keep going; the Albatross signals its unearthliness the minute it?s shot. By thoughtful re-imagination of this tale in another medium, you?re forced to write more of it, decide more about it, literalize when the poem seems to allow for more play of possibility. STC?s gloss can similarly seem to constrain. This project thoughtfully participates in the tradeoffs between specification and evocation that make STC?s poem so repeatedly seductive.

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